Shortlist Procedure | |
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Shortlisted Taglines (Benefit Descriptors) | |
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Shortlisted Taglines (Action Oriented) | |
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Reserved for use as cross-heads for specific target audiences | |
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TikiFest HU 2016 Proposals | |
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Proposed short succinct statement of what Tiki is | |
Remember that this statement should be as short and succinct as possible to convey the necessary information. Extra information can be provided in longer form in paragraphs or separate pages for people who need more details. This statement will be used as the first sentence in marketing material and on the website front page (possibly in a call out). "Tiki is an open source content management system (CMS) and wiki software used to build state-of-the-art web sites and applications that leverage its powerful collaboration and data management features."
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Comments or further suggestions | |
If you have any comments on any of the shortlist, or further suggestions for refinement or improvement, please put them here. Suggested changes to the above:
("easy-to-love" and "all-in-one" are both the same grammatical construction - multi-term modifiers, so both should be hyphenated; the comma can be removed as it isn't necessary.)
(A Tiki installation is a single instance, so using infrastructure in the countable sense may be better, which works better with "an" added.) |